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Help correcting these sentences? Will choose best answer.?
I have to correct these sentences for an English assignment, and for some reason my mind is completely blank. The problem must be identified and then rewritten in a better way. The problems will include: inappropriate language (colloquialisms or slang), wordiness, jargon, and gender-biased language (sexism.)
1.) The repeated phone calls aggravated me, but they made my mother plenty mad.
Problem: ___________
Revision: ___________
3.) We had a swell time at the party.
Problem: ___________
Revision: ___________
4.) All personnel who are functioning in the capacity of janitors will indicate that they have had the opportunity to read the following memo by affixing their signatures to the sheet of paper attached to the bottom of said document.
Problem: _________
Revision: _________
Thank you in advance, and I will give 10 pts to the best answer 
1. Prob: plenty mad is slang. Using mother as the subject is not sexism, so tell the teacher to get fucked.
Revision: made my mother very mad.
2. Prob: Swell is slang.
Revision: We had a great time at the party.
3: Prob: Wordy.
Revision: All janitors will indicate that they have read the following memo by signing the sheet of paper at the bottom of said memo.
Memo Ochoa Best Save - America vs Santos